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33 of its pages were printed, as 6 cm x 8.5 cm thumbnails, in ''[[Neon Genesis Evangelion Newtype 100% Collection]]'' (the pages about [[Sachiel]], [[Arael]], Shateiel, and Turel were omitted). All 35 were reprinted full-size in ''[[Evangelion Chronicle]]'', as 35 separate leaves, each with supplemental commentary on its opposite side.
33 of its pages were printed, as 6 cm x 8.5 cm thumbnails, in ''[[Neon Genesis Evangelion Newtype 100% Collection]]'' (the pages about [[Sachiel]], [[Arael]], Shateiel, and Turel were omitted). All 35 were reprinted full-size in ''[[Evangelion Chronicle]]'', as 35 separate leaves, each with supplemental commentary on its opposite side.
==Differences==


Numerous changes would be made between the Proposal and the final version of the show.  
Numerous changes would be made between the Proposal and the final version of the show.  
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===Evangelions===
===Evangelions===


*Eva-01 is most commonly depicted in white armor. Her trademark purple is nowhere to be seen.
*Stand-alone [[Evangelion Unit-05 (Rebuild)|Eva-05]] and [[Evangelion Unit-06 (Rebuild)|Eva-06]] models are present, rather than a [[Mass Production Evangelions|mass production Eva series]].
*Stand-alone [[Evangelion Unit-05 (Rebuild)|Eva-05]] and [[Evangelion Unit-06 (Rebuild)|Eva-06]] models are present, rather than a [[Mass Production Evangelions|mass production Eva series]].


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Entities called ''shito'' (使徒) are present, but the "alternate version" of this is "Apostolo" (アポストロ) rather than "Angel". (This is a much more literal approach, considering ''shito'' is the Japanese word reserved for the Biblical apostles.)
Entities called ''shito'' (使徒) are present, but the "alternate version" of this is "Apostolo" (アポストロ) rather than "Angel". (This is a much more literal approach, considering ''shito'' is the Japanese word reserved for the Biblical apostles.)


*An Apostolo called Raziel attacks in Episode 01 rather than Sachiel.
*There were to have been twenty-eighty Apostolos in all.
*An Apostolo called Raziel attacks in [[Episode 01]] rather than Sachiel.
*A design for Sachiel is presented, although unrecognizable save for the "amphibious monster" theme.  
*A design for Sachiel is presented, although unrecognizable save for the "amphibious monster" theme.  
*[[Ramiel]] looks the same, except each of its faces has a "cut-out" triangle floating above it.   
*[[Ramiel]] looks the same, except each of its faces has a "cut-out" triangle floating above it.   
*The [[Sahaquiel]] of Proposal is completely unrecognizable, essentially two spools of super-destructive ribbons (a la [[Zeruel]]'s arms) attached to a disembodied [[core]].
*The [[Sahaquiel]] of Proposal is completely unrecognizable, essentially two spools of super-destructive ribbons (a la [[Zeruel]]'s arms) attached to a disembodied [[core]].
*A human-shaped Apostolo, the prototype of [[Kaworu Nagisa]], appears earlier in the chronology and does not seem as important to the plot.
*Designs are disclosed for the unused Shateiel and Turel.
*The final Apostolo conflict involves the "twelve strongest", which descend from the Moon and vaporize the Americas.
===Other===
*The [[Artificial Evolution Laboratory]] is a contemporary establishment (not something restricted to the backstory).
*The [[First Ancestral Race]] are said to be prehistoric (possibly Terran?) lifeforms responsible for Adam and the Apostolos.
*The ending involves "the ancient ruins of Arka" -- a popular target of fan speculation.
==Translations==
===Page 1 (Cover Page)===
Neon Genesis Evangelion
TV Animation Series ''Shinseiki Evangelion'' (Tentative Title) Proposal
GAINAX
[<small>Note: ''Shinseiki Evangelion'' = ''Neon Genesis Evangelion''</small>]

Revision as of 17:45, 15 December 2007

First page of the Proposal.

The Neon Genesis Evangelion Proposal (企画書, kikakusho) is a 35-page, full-color document created in 1993, 2 years before the show's TV airing, for promotional purposes. It is essentially a prototype for the series, complete with production illustrations; notes on theme and story; write-ups on characters, mecha, and setting; and short summaries for the planned twenty-six episodes.

33 of its pages were printed, as 6 cm x 8.5 cm thumbnails, in Neon Genesis Evangelion Newtype 100% Collection (the pages about Sachiel, Arael, Shateiel, and Turel were omitted). All 35 were reprinted full-size in Evangelion Chronicle, as 35 separate leaves, each with supplemental commentary on its opposite side.

Differences

Numerous changes would be made between the Proposal and the final version of the show.

Characters

  • "Konrad Lorenz", rather than "Keel Lorenz". (This is actually the name of a famous Austrian biologist, completely unchanged.)
  • Fuyutsuki is 45 years old -- Gendo's junior rather than senior.
  • The penguin character does not have a listed name.
  • The character of Hikari is not present.

Evangelions

Angels

Entities called shito (使徒) are present, but the "alternate version" of this is "Apostolo" (アポストロ) rather than "Angel". (This is a much more literal approach, considering shito is the Japanese word reserved for the Biblical apostles.)

  • There were to have been twenty-eighty Apostolos in all.
  • An Apostolo called Raziel attacks in Episode 01 rather than Sachiel.
  • A design for Sachiel is presented, although unrecognizable save for the "amphibious monster" theme.
  • Ramiel looks the same, except each of its faces has a "cut-out" triangle floating above it.
  • The Sahaquiel of Proposal is completely unrecognizable, essentially two spools of super-destructive ribbons (a la Zeruel's arms) attached to a disembodied core.
  • A human-shaped Apostolo, the prototype of Kaworu Nagisa, appears earlier in the chronology and does not seem as important to the plot.
  • Designs are disclosed for the unused Shateiel and Turel.
  • The final Apostolo conflict involves the "twelve strongest", which descend from the Moon and vaporize the Americas.

Other

  • The Artificial Evolution Laboratory is a contemporary establishment (not something restricted to the backstory).
  • The First Ancestral Race are said to be prehistoric (possibly Terran?) lifeforms responsible for Adam and the Apostolos.
  • The ending involves "the ancient ruins of Arka" -- a popular target of fan speculation.

Translations

Page 1 (Cover Page)

Neon Genesis Evangelion

TV Animation Series Shinseiki Evangelion (Tentative Title) Proposal

GAINAX


[Note: Shinseiki Evangelion = Neon Genesis Evangelion]