Re-Take

ReTake

Evangelion Retake is a dojinshi written by studio kimigabuchi, trying to present a plausible ending to End Of Evangelion. The story is considered well written and although it does contain some hentai (pornographic material), it is relevant to the story, expressing emotions and feelings of the characters as well as the plain obvious.

ReTake vol 1

Opening Scenes

Retake Volume 01 begins where End of Evangelion left off with Shinji strangling Asuka on the beach after Third Impact. Asuka mutters her final words which are "Kimochi warui", (translated into English in the as "I feel sick", and as "How disgusting" in the EOE dub). From there Shinji wakes up in the hospital just after the 12th angel attacks with Rei sitting by the bed and Asuka behind the door (just as in the anime). From this point on Shinji has seen all the events of the future take place and wishes to change these events. The first thought of this, however, comes in a synchro test where Shinji's synchro rate sky rockets but when he is made aware he suppresses his true power so he doesn't make Asuka feel like she is losing to him.

Angel Bardiel

The next events are the same as the anime/manga from the same time window, Toji is selected as the next Eva pilot and Kensuke has his little whine about not getting picked. Although all of this is happening, Shinji acts differently towards Asuka, being a more positive and welcome friend to her , trying to do the correct thing and not being the wimp he was before, which he does quite well. As all of this is happening, Rei is being pushed aside and starts to get depressed, and shows affection towards Shinji. But he has seen everything and knows exactly what she is, and this scares him.

The battle of the 13th Angel is different from the original story. Asuka still wanting to show off ends up charging in and attacking Eva-03/Bardiel, The roles are reversed from the original story as now Asuka is getting choked instead of Shinji. As her vital signs fade, Eva-01 charges in to save her and Shinji succeeds not only in saving Asuka but retrieving Toji with only a dislocated shoulder, at the cost of showing his true strength in the process. This makes Asuka extremely enraged and she ends up having a fight with him in Misato's apartment. After the fight Asuka storms off leaving Shinji by himself where he says, "I didn't want for that to happen... Is it okay to let her be like that?" Then he has a flash back of the 14th Angel, Zeruel.

Angel Zeruel

The battle with Zeruel begins the same with the Angel breaching the 18 layers of armor protecting the Geofront. Shinji already rushes into fight, Asuka launches herself in Eva-02 in a fit of rage as she still doesn't want to lose to Shinji. Stunned, she watches Eva-01 fight the Angel, asking herself how Shinji is able to control his Eva so well; "There's no way Shinji can move that way..." Not wanting to lose to Shinji she opens fire with her rifle on the Angel and once again their roles are reversed.

Zeruel attacks with a blow that decapitates Eva-02's head in the anime/manga but Shinji jumps in front of her and Eva-01's head is removed (This scene is different from the anime/manga where Asuka would have run at Zeruel and had the nerve connections disconnected before the blow hit. In Retake she didn't run and the blow would have been fatal) but some how Eva-01's nerve connections are disconnected just prior to the blow hit. Wirh Eva-01 now headless and Asuka in a hysterical state, Shinji manages to reactivate Eva-01 and defeat Zeruel. Now throughout this scene Rei is pushed to the side as Asuka is shattered and this clearly shows in her facial expression of her belief of Shinji's death.