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"Berserk is a state in which an Evangelion has gone beyond Nerv's ability to control it" is improper grammar. The "it" isn't needed, which is why I killed ... ''it''. --[[User:Reichu|Reichu]] 19:34, 21 August 2007 (EDT) | "Berserk is a state in which an Evangelion has gone beyond Nerv's ability to control it" is improper grammar. The "it" isn't needed, which is why I killed ... ''it''. --[[User:Reichu|Reichu]] 19:34, 21 August 2007 (EDT) | ||
V, I don't mean to start a revert war, but your version of it is sloppy. I'm not saying that my edit couldn't have been improved upon, but this repetition of information and using quotes in odd places does not help very much. --[[User:UrsusArctos|UrsusArctos]] 01:13, 29 December 2007 (PST) | |||
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"Berserk is a state in which an Evangelion has gone beyond Nerv's ability to control it" is improper grammar. The "it" isn't needed, which is why I killed ... it. --Reichu 19:34, 21 August 2007 (EDT)
V, I don't mean to start a revert war, but your version of it is sloppy. I'm not saying that my edit couldn't have been improved upon, but this repetition of information and using quotes in odd places does not help very much. --UrsusArctos 01:13, 29 December 2007 (PST)
