Talk:Episode 18

Synopsis

Just did a little work on this myself. It's looking quite a bit better, but it still needs more rewriting to be up to par. (Out of curiosity, Wayne, why did "Eva" get lowercased in that one revision of yours? That struck me as a bit odd.)

I axed the footnote about why Bardiel retained the entry plug. Probably having a T&A page on the Bardi-03-Toji ordeal to refer folks to would be best. (Some of the stuff recently hoisted onto Eva-03's page would be better suited for a page like this, too.) --Reichu 22:43, 5 May 2009 (PDT)