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This is ''very'' good. If I might suggest, you should explain more clearly what the physical description of the equipment looks like, i.e. you mention a "brain" in there without describing to the reader what this whole thing looks like. Also you say cables must run to Lilith in "Central Dogma", but Lilith is in Terminal Dogma. Btw, do you think "Dummy Plug Plant" is what we should officially call this? that is I've heart "Dummy Plug Production Facility" thrown around....I don't remember if it was called anything officially....ah what the heck if no one has issues, call it "Dummy Plug Plant". Anyway, you may want to clarify what "releasing the destrado" means (Rei stew...)--[[User:V|V]] 13:49, 28 January 2008 (PST) | This is ''very'' good. If I might suggest, you should explain more clearly what the physical description of the equipment looks like, i.e. you mention a "brain" in there without describing to the reader what this whole thing looks like. Also you say cables must run to Lilith in "Central Dogma", but Lilith is in Terminal Dogma. Btw, do you think "Dummy Plug Plant" is what we should officially call this? that is I've heart "Dummy Plug Production Facility" thrown around....I don't remember if it was called anything officially....ah what the heck if no one has issues, call it "Dummy Plug Plant". Anyway, you may want to clarify what "releasing the destrado" means (Rei stew...)--[[User:V|V]] 13:49, 28 January 2008 (PST) | ||
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While I don't think having material on the occult source of the DPP visuals is a bad idea, what Zuggy included is far too detailed and dense IMO. It ought to be distilled to the basics, and put in plain words. --[[User:Reichu|Reichu]] 08:46, 5 May 2009 (PDT) | |||
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This is very good. If I might suggest, you should explain more clearly what the physical description of the equipment looks like, i.e. you mention a "brain" in there without describing to the reader what this whole thing looks like. Also you say cables must run to Lilith in "Central Dogma", but Lilith is in Terminal Dogma. Btw, do you think "Dummy Plug Plant" is what we should officially call this? that is I've heart "Dummy Plug Production Facility" thrown around....I don't remember if it was called anything officially....ah what the heck if no one has issues, call it "Dummy Plug Plant". Anyway, you may want to clarify what "releasing the destrado" means (Rei stew...)--V 13:49, 28 January 2008 (PST)
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While I don't think having material on the occult source of the DPP visuals is a bad idea, what Zuggy included is far too detailed and dense IMO. It ought to be distilled to the basics, and put in plain words. --Reichu 08:46, 5 May 2009 (PDT)
