FGC:Episode 11 Cut 018: Difference between revisions
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|comment=As noted in our episode synopsis, it's odd that Maya talks about the supercomputers as though she's only ever heard of them, although she assists Ritsuko in their operation on a daily basis. There's surely a better line to explain to the audience what the Magi (who have been mostly referred to in background dialogue) are?}} | |comment=As noted in our episode synopsis, it's odd that Maya talks about the supercomputers as though she's only ever heard of them, although she assists Ritsuko in their operation on a daily basis. There's surely a better line to explain to the audience what the Magi (who have been mostly referred to in background dialogue) are?}} | ||
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|comment=}} | |comment=Perhaps (in universe) to clarify that this isn't some other cabal sharing the name, combined with a level of uninvolvement in the civic/political aspects of the city.}} | ||
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