Talk:Evangelion 1.0: You Are (Not) Alone

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Now that it's out, should this page be completely scrapped and rewritten? Details of the trailers are not particularly worthy of encyclopedic entry.--Szmitten 12:38, 11 January 2008 (PST)

Yes I will update it.--V 12:40, 11 January 2008 (PST)
Okay I did what I could but I'm not sure if I what I wrote makes any sense, I'm now embarrased of it, and I want anyone that wants to simply erase it (if it stinks) to please do so. --V 18:26, 11 January 2008 (PST)
Let me handle this.--UrsusArctos 18:16, 17 January 2008 (PST)
Done now, I've presented the corpus of the theory in a much more NPOV-compatible writing. Remains of the old theory are highlighted in green, as a warning to those faint of heart. :P --UrsusArctos 19:00, 17 January 2008 (PST)
I will revise/assimilate this to try to make it as good as it can be. As for the water color thing you're actually write about the whole lakes thing I just didn't get to adding that in. Also...yeah I went back and rewatched and its not the same scene cut in half; Shinji later on walks onto the roof. Odd...--V 20:38, 17 January 2008 (PST)
As an old genetics major, I just think the way you phrased it was awkward, but...well an "internet search" of "Terminal Dogma" even 10 years ago would have revealed that it's not a "real term". Er...I will "rephrase" that but leave the general idea in...--V 21:02, 17 January 2008 (PST)
Okay, good news: turns out we've hit the 32 KB limit anyway so we'll move analysis of the Final Scene to its own "Theory and Analysis" page. I was getting antsy because I didn't want this much....unorthodox phrasing on a "standard" page, but really it should have been a T&A page from the start. Please join me on the new T&A page I needs a lot of help, and we've got to get it done somehow.... ^_^ --V 21:02, 17 January 2008 (PST)

Differences section

I'm sure it's early for me to suggest this, but shouldn't the overly-long section be moved or something to http://evageeks.org/FGP/Guides:Neon_Genesis_Evangelion_vs._Evangelion_1.0 ? The section for differences is far too long. And we have more than just trailer stills now, so that whole section could use some touchups. I may be able to work on it tomorrow, I'm just making sure that'd be a good idea. Shiro 22:02, 19 January 2008 (PST)

The painstaking frame by frame comparisons I don't think are part of the Evapedia itself but the great fan project; besides, this provides a convenient one-place list of what's different as opposed to having to rummage through lots of screenshot galleries. I will split it off for size limitation issues. --V 07:03, 20 January 2008 (PST)

OK, that works. I'm new to this wiki, so I don't really know how everything works. Shiro 10:12, 20 January 2008 (PST)

Ok. Did you read through the boot camp? What might you want to work on? --V 10:51, 20 January 2008 (PST)

Shinji and the bridge

"After contemplating suicide, he is brought back by Nerv employees." Is this wording okay (I had nothing to do with this article :P ) or should it be tweaked? I think it's fine, but I know people's thoughts vary on whether or not Shinji wanted to kill himself at the bridge scene. --Sailor Star Dust 17:15, 23 March 2009 (PDT)

I don't think it should be stated as some kind of fact, no. --Reichu 21:48, 23 March 2009 (PDT)