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9 January 2015
- 23:3023:30, 9 January 2015 diff hist +7 m Ritsuko Akagi Minor grammar and syntax edits for clarity/correctness
3 September 2014
- 18:0718:07, 3 September 2014 diff hist +8 m Shinji Ikari Various minor edits to wording and grammar in sections 1.1 and 1.2
- 17:3617:36, 3 September 2014 diff hist +4 m Shinji Ikari Adjusted wording and comma use in final sentence of first paragraph for grammar and clarity.
23 October 2013
- 23:0323:03, 23 October 2013 diff hist −1 m Adam Corrected punctuation at the end of quotations, i.e. "Quote". changed to "Quote."
- 22:5222:52, 23 October 2013 diff hist +65 m Asuka Langley Soryu Clarified language in "Early Life" regarding Kyoko's contact experiment and subsequent insanity.
- 01:0301:03, 23 October 2013 diff hist −1 m Asuka Langley Soryu Corrected misspellings in paragraph 1 of "Early Life"
