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This is ''very'' good. If I might suggest, you should explain more clearly what the physical description of the equipment looks like, i.e. you mention a "brain" in there without describing to the reader what this whole thing looks like. Also you say cables must run to Lilith in "Central Dogma", but Lilith is in Terminal Dogma. Btw, do you think "Dummy Plug Plant" is what we should officially call this? that is I've heart "Dummy Plug Production Facility" thrown around....I don't remember if it was called anything officially....ah what the heck if no one has issues, call it "Dummy Plug Plant". --[[User:V|V]] 13:49, 28 January 2008 (PST) | This is ''very'' good. If I might suggest, you should explain more clearly what the physical description of the equipment looks like, i.e. you mention a "brain" in there without describing to the reader what this whole thing looks like. Also you say cables must run to Lilith in "Central Dogma", but Lilith is in Terminal Dogma. Btw, do you think "Dummy Plug Plant" is what we should officially call this? that is I've heart "Dummy Plug Production Facility" thrown around....I don't remember if it was called anything officially....ah what the heck if no one has issues, call it "Dummy Plug Plant". Anyway, you may want to clarify what "releasing the destrado" means (Rei stew...)--[[User:V|V]] 13:49, 28 January 2008 (PST) | ||
Revision as of 21:51, 28 January 2008
This is very good. If I might suggest, you should explain more clearly what the physical description of the equipment looks like, i.e. you mention a "brain" in there without describing to the reader what this whole thing looks like. Also you say cables must run to Lilith in "Central Dogma", but Lilith is in Terminal Dogma. Btw, do you think "Dummy Plug Plant" is what we should officially call this? that is I've heart "Dummy Plug Production Facility" thrown around....I don't remember if it was called anything officially....ah what the heck if no one has issues, call it "Dummy Plug Plant". Anyway, you may want to clarify what "releasing the destrado" means (Rei stew...)--V 13:49, 28 January 2008 (PST)
