Resources Talk:End of Evangelion Screenplays

Playground scene

For the benefit of Theory and Analysis:Sandbox Sequence, could someone translate how the playground scene differs? Looking in Google Translate, there seems to be at least 5 differences:

1. the overall scene seems to be placed before Shinji strangles Asuka and 3I begins
2. the draft seems to say that the mother might be Yui or Misato, whereas the standard script says just Misato;
3. the draft also seems to suggest that one of the doll-girls is Asuka.
4. As well, there seems to be a lot of cut material toward the end of the playground sequences; I read them as Shinji's elementary teacher and a classmate insulting him as pathetic and then
5. Asuka being asked about her relationship to Shinji and denying it (but I'd love to see correct translations)

Kindergarten children are playing in the back (Ppoku生音documentary), singing of nursery rhymes.
Empty swings. Behind it, the sun is inclined to see the mountain.
Small sandpit at the bottom of the slide.
Shinji "Yes. I thought something there. Same as when I started the cello"
Believe "in something and come here, I thought"
Sand castle (or a pyramid?) Believe young girls are making. (Or in young Asuka?)
Girls' Semasho complete luck? "
Girls' a fine castle "
Shinji little "Yes!"
Eager young Shinji.
Girl's mother goes to the park entrance. (Yui No, you can either figure of Misato?)
Girls' Oh, Mom. Bye "
Dig a shovel, bolt at full speed at the mother's girl.
Potsun and Shinji young person being left behind.
Laughing, the script does well to glance at Shinji young girl with her ​​mother to go back.
Moment, holding hands looking young men and women. (Or Iran?)
Shinji cry young face.
Has also been取Ri直Shi care, start making a castle.
The sun is already down, a sandbox.
Has been completed, the sand castle.
Shinji young are looking for a while.
Suddenly begin to break into the kick. (Dashed lines represent the SE in Tsu Shinekari naughty?)
Also see Castle tragic.
This time, weeping, young Shinji has been reverting back.
The small sandbox, that sounds of weeping young Shinji.


Alone, crying in the classroom desk, Shinji in elementary school.
On the back noise, music and announcements from school.
Classmates male voice "chip, Just because you're in a teacher, and wants to notice you!"
Female teacher's voice "again, I annoying child"
Female classmate's voice, "It's a way"
Female classmate's voice "in their habits can not do anything alone"


　　　 Person, sitting at a desk in the classroom, Asuka in elementary school.
Noise in the back, and get kids playing with voices from Kyakkya Tsu. (German?)
Male classmate's voice, "What's the best test, why not speak anything"
Voice of Asuka in elementary school "and Bakabakashikutsu, we just talk"
Classmates male voice, "pfft, it's high caught and therefore, it depends what kind?"
Voice of Asuka in elementary school, "by what? Watts from Antalya and we'm wrong!"
Asuka's voice, "Do not together!" 

--Gwern 16:41, 12 September 2011 (UTC)